Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.


Teachers feedback:
WWW
Camera movement - pans, zooms, range of shots and good pace

Good lip syncing - good performance, actions/ scenes, matching lyrics
Several locations
Good non - linear editing 
Framing = lighting
Good concept

Ebi 
Need to upload music video research
Lighting?
More close ups
Include a performance element (chorus)

Student www :
Good locations, they match the song
zoom in mirror
Good editing
fast paced
performative element
Lip syncing
Camera movement
Good use of props
Good concept
Entertaining
Good synergy with the music 

Ebi

Better lighting in the beginning
Faster pace editing 
Quality 
Music video research
More close ups

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.


WWW: 
narrative 
good use of props
zoom in

EBI : 
shots
lighting 
quality 


3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I had started off with a different music idea so the initial objective was not made

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

To focus on the lighting and to have a performance throughout the video as i cannot only rely on the lyrics.

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as Mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.



I might include different actors and change pieces of the Mise en scene such as the costume


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